Shooting
Star
Last night I caught a
shooting star
And put it in my pocket
I'd heard a song about it
once
And thought I'd make a
locket
Too bad for me the song
was wrong
And now my state is dire
Because that star was
still quite hot
My pants, they caught on
fire
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I'm curious what your take on iambic pentameter is? Does it make poetry more enjoyable? Easier to read? Does it distract? Does it remind you too much of Shakespeare? Does it still need to have a rhyming scheme or is the rhyming unnecessary?
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